Jordan

Another old one. About not getting into Heaven. Used this in a song as well for part of the chorus but can't find it at the moment.

Jordan

 

 

This river rages,

This one before me.

Not letting me pass

For eternity.

 

Legion

(circa 1985)

Reviews

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Sounds a little like Dante's Inferno. For such a tiny piece it packs a punch to the soul. Now you have me thinking....

[Bluet_Belle]

This is a total stick of dynamite.

Its small, but it makes a huge impact.

We've all, on some level, had similar thoughts/doubts about things such as this, and this piece exhudes that overwhelming hopelessness between every line.

Well done:)

[Angel's Lady]

The River Jordan, huh. Great job. It does make one ponder.