The Greatest Love Poem Ever Written

The Greatest Love Poem Ever Written

A Poem by Legion
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Something that just popped into my head. About a two minute write. Thought I'd share.

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The Greatest Love Poem Ever Written

 

 

The greatest love poem ever written

Can not be found scribed on parchment

Nor typed within pixels on a screen.

The greatest love poem ever written

Can not be bound within a book

Nor etched in monuments to be seen.

The greatest love poem ever written

Can not abide the captivity of words

But with lovers, it survives shared between.

 

Legion

26July08

© 2008 Legion


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The greatest love poem ever written
Can not be found scribed on parchment
Nor typed within pixels on a screen.
Can not be bound within a book
Nor etched in monuments to be seen.
Can not abide the captivity of words
But with lovers, it survives shared between.

Each line well written, nicely done.


Posted 16 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.




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Very wonderfully put! Great job!

Posted 16 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

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hmmmm...how does that song go?......words...dont come easy to me...this is the onlllllllly way......(me singing)

me like. (didnt wanna say love) :-P

x,
O!

Posted 16 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

I don't have any critique to offer, because it is true and perfect. :)

Posted 16 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

pretty amazing for a 2-minute write! i enjoyed reading it, because it flowed very well.

Posted 16 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

sweetness. purest.
adore this heart which never will stop
and this my friend, is the beauteous earth.

loved it!!

Posted 16 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

it's true that some feelings and thoughts are just too big for words to capture. but that's what poets are for. they make the attempt. you did well.

Posted 16 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Isn't that the truth! Poets have attempted through the millennia to sit and compose love poems, knowing full-well their words do not even approach what true love is. This is why so many write of love: they want to add their attempts into the big barrel of what love is. Love is not a thing for words but deeds.

And I loved this poem of yours.

Sal

Posted 16 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

The greatest love poem ever written
Can not be found scribed on parchment
Nor typed within pixels on a screen.
Can not be bound within a book
Nor etched in monuments to be seen.
Can not abide the captivity of words
But with lovers, it survives shared between.

Each line well written, nicely done.


Posted 16 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.


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