She Likes Poultry

Something fun I was goofing around with. But I hope if I ever become famous for my writing that people don't consider this the pinnacle of my work. LOL

 

 

 

She Likes Poultry

 

 

 

My gal she lieks dat poultry

Always readin up on da stuff

Books an ledders frum lubbers

She jest cant git enuff

Shookspare wid his

Rumao an Julia

And Darndes Inburno

She says will do ya

Bud her favoright

Ov all dat poultry

Is wun wridden

By her won an onlee

 

Sew take dat all you

Wridders ov poultry

Wid ur witz and ur wurds

Hur hard belones

Two me onlee

Cause mie poultry makes us lub burds

 

Legion

30June08

Author's Note

Seriously, I hope it's not my pinnacle. :)

Reviews

[Angelheaded Hipster]

This is cute...a write from a love struck illiterate guy. I had a smile on my face at the end of the write, and you know...it says a lot....its not the words, well, it is the words, but its also how they are portrayed.

Its the message, no matter how badly misspelled.

[fireblossom]

ha. funny and cute and refreshing.

i hope it isn't your pinnacle as well.

[radian7]

Great fun. I am not sure why, but Tom Waits and Jim Jarmusch come to mind. Fun crazy fun.

[Sojourner]

Legion,
Took a minute for me to get past preconceived ideas. Poultry for poetry? Well-Duh! if you take into consideration the narrator's dialect.

This is a m ost humorous piece and a pleasure to read. I can find nothing to comment upon so I will read it again and just enjoy.

[Ralphy]

hahaha, that was really neat to read...here I was expecting chicken...lol

[Helen Woodward]

HAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I really, really needed this tonight, what an insightful work this is! Colloquial language run amok and so nicely done. Loved it, Loved it, loved it!!!
The funniest thing I have read in a long time.
Thank you...smart arse!
Helen :-)

[Kriss]

AHAHHAHAH! YES!that is amazing, I love it wow that is so funny hahahahaha. Adorale and clever. you rock!


♥Kriss

[LadyLove]

Awww..I thought it was cute! Poultry? Haha...totally off track! And may all other poulets bern in darnedays inberno if they catch her eye! But I do believe her heart is his! Great fun! Ha ha!

[Donald Meikle]

I useter play pinnacle wid a dubbell dek

[Gandré]

This was .... I am speechess, smart, magnificient pointe....ha ! "for your poetry makes you two love birds" ha. Write on, this is delicious. I can't get enough of this poem.