She Likes Poultry

Something fun I was goofing around with. But I hope if I ever become famous for my writing that people don't consider this the pinnacle of my work. LOL

 

 

 

She Likes Poultry

 

 

 

My gal she lieks dat poultry

Always readin up on da stuff

Books an ledders frum lubbers

She jest cant git enuff

Shookspare wid his

Rumao an Julia

And Darndes Inburno

She says will do ya

Bud her favoright

Ov all dat poultry

Is wun wridden

By her won an onlee

 

Sew take dat all you

Wridders ov poultry

Wid ur witz and ur wurds

Hur hard belones

Two me onlee

Cause mie poultry makes us lub burds

 

Legion

30June08

Author's Note

Seriously, I hope it's not my pinnacle. :)

Reviews

[Angelheaded Hipster]

This is cute...a write from a love struck illiterate guy. I had a smile on my face at the end of the write, and you know...it says a lot....its not the words, well, it is the words, but its also how they are portrayed.

Its the message, no matter how badly misspelled.

[Dave "Doc" Rogers]

I lub it!
Funny and a sidways look at poetry ... ahemm... poultry. This was a fun read. And when you are famous you might just be famous for you sidways looks at things. I seem to remember a poet being famous for an Ode to a Louse. :)

Cheers!
Doc.

[Ananke]

This is great. Such a fun piece of poultry!

[Bluet_Belle]

ILOVETHISPIECE!!!!!

I saw the title, and i thought it sounde interesteing... It is starnge, and unique and mos def one of the best i've read in a while:P

Kudos:P Not many could make this work:P

[C. Harter Amos]

LOL. Cute poultry. Consistently sharp throughout, which is hard to do when playing!

[Tessa]

ahhhhhhhh! i love this. this is awesome. i laughed out loud, my neighbor must think i'm crazy. :-)

[Andromeda]

hehehehe very cute.

[T]

That was fun to read!!! Thank you for sharing with us

[C.T. Bailey]

Being from East Tennessee and all...maybe I should be a bit concerned that I read this thing through like it was my native tongue! Seriously. We'uns got dat kina talk don herya. Love it...it is the essence of what we do. Capturing the flavor of humanity in a snapshot that others might be able to understand and enjoy.
Nice.
Todd

[LSS]

Jim,
I just fell in love with this poem. Its so wonderfully written. You've caught the flavor and sense of most efforts behind writing poetry, and had a bit of fun with it. I've had to share it with some other writers I converse with, I know they'll love it too. I'll have to read up more on your stuff, to see if you're as good a writer as you seem to be. This may not be the pinnacle of your efforts but it's well on its way. I'm going to have to copy and paste it to a few of my e-mail friends.
Lar

[Holly Lock]

Hahaha, that's adorable. When I first started reading I was like, "he can't be serious, look at all the spelling errors" 'n stuff. But now I realize that it was done that way intentionally, and it's really cute. Is it supposed to be like an accent?