Light Falls

Originally for a six word contest. It even rhymes.

Light Falls

 

 

 

He fell,

 

From Heaven

 

Into Hell.

 

 

Legion

01Jun08

Reviews

[Justin Tobey]

It's amazing how such small stories and poems have such great meaning in them. I think you've captured more of a story and more meaning than some other poems I've read that are two or three pages in length. Excellent write! :D

[Angel's Lady]

How simply put. Perfect!

[holly]

Nice play on words - light and Lucifer (implied).

[Colin H.]

Very short and effective.
=]
I like.

[robin]

I love

how simple

it Is

[April Child]

That's how it can be, just takes one moment and everything can change. Well put.

[Periac]

straight and to the point.......intresting

[TamiViolet]

And it happens so quickly sometimes, eh? Heaven to Hell...without even blinking..
Excellent, love. Good luck with the contest.
XOX

[JC]

Very clever, sometimes it's all about the quality!

Good job.

JC

[undisguised]

Mmm delicious
sometimes one must crawl through the fires of hell to get to heaven..
I liked it