Light Falls

Originally for a six word contest. It even rhymes.

Light Falls

 

 

 

He fell,

 

From Heaven

 

Into Hell.

 

 

Legion

01Jun08

Reviews

[Chaos]

I loved it! How much more powerful can six words get than that. Lucifer fell from heaven to hell; timeless.

Clever and creative!

Chaos~

[O!]

HAHAHAHHAHHAH....this was funny and VERY VERY CLEVER!!...HAHAHAHA........and i especially LOVE the title!!....its fits superbly!! hahaha...Light Falls!! Hilarious!!!

ty for making me laugh real loud!

x,
O!

[Gandré]

The hell is now!

Wonderful composition it is...

Soon he will emerge from the hell into knowing.

[Ms Jessica Renee]

Simple yet effective. Nice work.

[Debbie]

and of course I immediately think of Lucifer, though it could mean many kinds of falling, it is the title that seems to label this as the intent...thank you for taking time to read Tyburn, it is always welcome to get a nudge

[ToxicTears]

Obvious meaning and great word choice!

[Dorchadas]

the simplist of words often carry the most depth ;)

...pork chops on the menu tonight then ~laughs evilly~

[Sarah B.]

well put...

[emmajoy]

Again, just a well chosen or used words, but a tome in meaning.

The meaning is obvious, yet somehow subtle.

Thank you for sharing.

[closed account]

powerful 6 words,,, what is eary is that it was a 6 word poem about a fallen angel, which some say is the devils number.. very good and kind of creepy!!