Contradicting Lennon

A contradiction and the thought of life without someone you love. A haiku of sorts.

Contradicting Lennon

 

 

John said, "Imagine

there's no Heaven.", but I can't

See life without you.

 

Legion

8Mar08

Reviews

[Kitty]

I LOVE John Lennon. And I love this poem!!! It's so true to how I feel now. I can't imagine being without the man in my life right now...

Great job!!!!!!!

Josie

[Tomás Ó C..]

Maybe if you ended the haiku with "it", the poem might work as a christain apologist poem? Is that the angle your trying to get at? Or are you saying you miss Lennon? Either way, I loved it.

[cyanskye]

Oh, I like this! Great job.
C

[R J Askew]

The title drew me into this one...and I like it.

[Windy]

My feelings exactly........So simple, yet SO Meaningfull. Congrats on finding the perfect lines!

[Seven]

I'm not sure if anything you've ever said has ever made me like you more. This is a beautiful thought.

[Sean M. Addams]

a very uplifting piece great job on this one

[Rain]

So much said, with so few words. Loved it. Rain..

[April Child]

Great haiku! :)

[Pinky]

aww... that is cheesy and cute and yea... sweet... awww... good job!