Dance

Dance

A Poem by Legion
"

Something I wrote while watching a butterfly years ago.

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Dance

 

Form flowing freely,

Excited by the

Rhythm

Of time.

 

Wavering

In balance

To a

Specific melody.

 

Fluctuating

With the pulse

Of an

Omnipresent beat.

 

Butterfly

Dance to the

Sounds of

Tranquility.

 

Legion

(circa 1984)

© 2008 Legion


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I also love to watch butterflies and i always see them in total bliss, and your writing this on a butterfly is really amazing .. the way you associate them to dancing
Nice job!

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

It is beautiful to watch butterflies dancing. A lovely write. Thank you for sharing. Debileah

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Now this is beautiful... for me, reading the few words on each line, is like watching the butterfly's wings moving up and down, gently, slowwwwly.

Seems we both watch butterflies.

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I love this, because I studied ballet. As I read it, I feel the movement.

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lovely and delicate. Inspired writing.

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on February 12, 2008

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