Within the Shallows

Within the Shallows

A Poem by Legion
"

Look deeper past the shallows and you might find a whole new world.

"

Within the Shallows

 

You stand within the shallows

Judging the surface of the words,

But our lives go so much deeper

If one dives into this world.

Look past the casual glimpse

And stare beneath that darkened sea.

The message stands to deliver

If you glance past the first you see.

 

Legion

28Nov07

 

© 2008 Legion


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Deep writing. So deep that I had to lok deeper and read it again.
Lov all,
Mejasha

Posted 16 Years Ago


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