An Obituary for Jane Doe

An Obituary for Jane Doe

She was poetry in motion in a place penned only in prose.
She sought to soar with ravens but was savaged by the crows.
She longed for a legendary life while stuck in her sedentary shell.
Her grand finale never fulfilled; a fruitless life languished in hell.

Legion
08Dec16

Reviews

[Fabian G. Franklin]

Some women are so harsh in life they only deserve mention in an "Oh, b***h you were" column after their demise. ;)

[Nolo Segundo]

Short and not very sweet, but quite well written-- it is no small feat to capture a life within a few lines, even a life of despair.

[Contessa]

I love this! short and complex, and it gets the point across beautifully. I love the rhyming couplets; it's a very nice touch. Overall really good job!!!