Jekyll or Hyde?

Jekyll or Hyde?

by Leggolas

“I Love You”
“I Hate you”
“I want you so much”

“I need you”
“Just let go”
“I long for your touch”

“Kiss me”
“Resist me”
“Take”
“If you must”

“We’ll keep it platonic”
“I’m dripping with lust”

“Undress me”
“Don’t stress me”
“Possess me”
“Don’t fuss”

“You’re my all”
“Just don’t call”
“Don’t want to discuss”

“You’re awesome”
“You’re irksome”
“Especial”
“and then?”

“Can’t lose you”
“Don’t speak to me ever again”


Hot and cold
up and down
back and forth.
Why?

Enthusing
Bemusing
Amusing
Awry.

So can anyone help me,
for I still can’t decide,
was my relationship with Jekyll?
or was it with Hyde?

Reviews

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... amazing ... this verse has a distinct rhythm ... the unique rhyming pattern makes the rendition very enchanting ... and the way i see it ... this verse is immensely poetic ... but brutal ... it slices, it cuts, it shreds ... very skillfully ... it asks "someone" all the questions that need to be asked ... and more importantly ... that need to be answered ... i'm inspired ... this is an excellent example of how very few words can be employed for a powerful effect ... and this verse is dramatic too ... it's racy ... it's conversational ... it's intense ... and i think the title has been justified rather well ... an awesome read ... :) ...

[x]

Hmm, interesting. I love it for its contridictory weave but I have always been partial to positives and negatives juxtaposed together. It has the effect of allowing the reader to go their own way while at the same time, the write expresses what is on the writers mind.....so, it is a piece that gives.
Well done....100 from me.

[Sweet_pale_cacophony]

This is very interesting..it may have various interpretations...to me it comes across as the various moods of lovers..which can vary from heated arguments to tender caresses....a very interesting theme and dealt v.well

[April]

werid list poem but nice to read

[Emily Paige]

This is good it's a list poem which I love

[The Official Gary B]

Love it for sureee =)