Real Talk

Life's Just a blur to me now so i'm living with a fog over my eyes

not being able to see.

I have my fitted cap low so my eyes you can't see.

For the simple fact my eyes tell my life's story.

A story that's so shocking that if i told you it would stop you in 

your tracks.

I'm living for today and no longer looking back.

Im keeping my head above the influence more so above the lies.

I'm no longer going to fall i will start to rise.

I'm getting tired of all the pain and added stress.

I will forever strive to be the best.

At whatever i do its my main mission and goal in life.

I wont stop until all the wrongs are right.

I'm done acting like someone else.

I'm starting to be me.

You will see me among the stars in the sky where i'll truly be free.

I want to spread my wings wide and soar among the clouds.

I'm finally free i will scream it loud.

I thank god for all my blessings and to him i will always pray.

I sit and pray to the lord for a better day.

Lord you've dine so much for me and i'm grateful.

I sit here and remain hopeful.

This is my story real talk for the soul....

Reviews

[Stacey]

Wonderful writing! I feel you have exposed your story and in wonderful fashion. Beautiful words that make a statement about where you've been and where you're going. Fabulous!

[Tomi]

cool

[Ladysue]

I love that real talk for the soul. Now that is something profound. A lot of emotion in this piece but so inspirational...so well done...

[darkgurl]

This is full of emotion and ever so powerful.

[truth]

Brilliant writing - it was as if you were directly in front and kept us thinking the new thoughts. You have wrapped your hope around these words and that is showing your strong spirit. The work flowed and gave the reader a great deal of comfort. The world is and can be a cold and chilling place and yet we all know each day brings new light and new beginnings - thanks for sharing this cheers

[Michael X]

powerful and poetically sculpted thought, draws senses of aspiration, and
speaks a volume in reflection, awsome job, keep it up.

[Dutch Jr.]

Your eyes tell your life story... so true for all of us. I like the determination tone of this writing, powerful use of your words.

[Avoiry]

Real talk for the soul..i like that. The rhyme gives the piece a tempo of its own and it flows together very nicely. I like how you mention eyes telling a life story because to an extent i think they do. Wonderful