Dark Secrets

Lights Out... You can't find what you can't see. I’ve become a clouded face, unrecognized

DARK SECRETS

 

These eyes Tainted and Scarred,

The Heart restless behind bars,

A Soul lost between then and now

 

I’ve become a clouded face, unrecognized,

A Shadow within materializes

Unaware, there’s no time to prepare,

Unleashing its fury for all to bear

 

Strength it feeds from those who care,

Twisting and turning words and stares

Form is now what I once was,

It’s Poison if any… One of Love

 

Shadow now I, fight I try...

For those I hurt, my words are lies

Understand I cry, I feel your pain,

Ball and Chain, I am restrained

 

Pleasure filled, Darkness slips away,

Face left to those I've betrayed

Strength to hold on, You reach for my hand,

Smiling and Scarred, Your eyes Understand

 

SHADOW lingers and laughs within,

Your LOVE inside, he cannot win

 

Legacy

Author's Note

What is your Dark Secret - visit and enter yours today http://www.writerscafe.org/contests/-Volume-1%2C-Book-2--Dark-Secrets/13548/

P.S. Re-read and between the lines

Legacy

Reviews

[Luis Gabriel]

I love the minimalism! I love the shortness of the statements to really pack the punch of the emotion displayed! The only constructive work I would do is maybe some constructive imagery to tie the emotions to something I can see or feel, it feels alot like there are so many things felt blending all together I don't know where to start!

Great job, keep it up!

[MsFrazier]

girl feels the poem.

[ClockWork GRIMM]

Hmm... I love the emotions trying to be expressed but I'm a stickler about originality of idea and wording... So... I say.. Awesome... Better than my work

[nolaftw]

I love it. Flows really well.

[ShadowOfTheDay]

Ohh my gosh! Very very good!

[Kimmee Jean]

very seductive piece. brings you in and doesn't let you go.

[MDC (Missouri)]

This work is from a writer's perspective (at least this writer) excellant because it stimulated me to write. The darkness, the angst, brought me some excellant creative concepts. Thanks.

[StillShorterThanYou]

ohh my god! that is soo cool!!

[Scion of the Storms]

Fantastic and incredible, great piece of work

[BlindedMinded]

Wow it's incredible, hypnatizing in a way..a really great peice of artwork

[Junger]

it is increadable in the way it makes my self feel it is amazing how it is this good