Dark Secrets

Lights Out... You can't find what you can't see. I’ve become a clouded face, unrecognized

DARK SECRETS

 

These eyes Tainted and Scarred,

The Heart restless behind bars,

A Soul lost between then and now

 

I’ve become a clouded face, unrecognized,

A Shadow within materializes

Unaware, there’s no time to prepare,

Unleashing its fury for all to bear

 

Strength it feeds from those who care,

Twisting and turning words and stares

Form is now what I once was,

It’s Poison if any… One of Love

 

Shadow now I, fight I try...

For those I hurt, my words are lies

Understand I cry, I feel your pain,

Ball and Chain, I am restrained

 

Pleasure filled, Darkness slips away,

Face left to those I've betrayed

Strength to hold on, You reach for my hand,

Smiling and Scarred, Your eyes Understand

 

SHADOW lingers and laughs within,

Your LOVE inside, he cannot win

 

Legacy

Author's Note

What is your Dark Secret - visit and enter yours today http://www.writerscafe.org/contests/-Volume-1%2C-Book-2--Dark-Secrets/13548/

P.S. Re-read and between the lines

Legacy

Reviews

[Luis Gabriel]

I love the minimalism! I love the shortness of the statements to really pack the punch of the emotion displayed! The only constructive work I would do is maybe some constructive imagery to tie the emotions to something I can see or feel, it feels alot like there are so many things felt blending all together I don't know where to start!

Great job, keep it up!

[Alice]

this poem draws you in and the pull of the words is amazing!

[Null]

amazing C: ., thoroughly enjoyed it. *highfive*

[Merth]

Seems that you have 2 personalities and he knows and he likes that cause he understand, or he only understand and laughs cause is new for him? Or i dont understand any, jajaja, let me know....

[Joshua]

Extremely good... keep up the absolutely amazing work, you are a great poet.

[melissa]

This poem really is great keep them coming my way

[Tania's Novels]

I really love this poem,it's amazing! Keep up the good work!

[Jokorium]

To be completely honest, this is quite amazing.
It flows amazingly, near flawlessly.
I love the way it's worded. Many would probably word this piece differently, and it would be much less effective in conveying the message of it.
Great job. =)

[kymee]

Great poem, I really would't change too much. keep up the good work

[Avinash Nagaraj]

nice one mate! :)