Proverb� #1

Proverb� #1

A Poem by Legacy

 

 

 

A distinctive cry proclaims ‘with-in’
Infusing what is known or provokes immorality.
 

  

© 2007 Legacy

© 2008 Legacy


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Very nice...I like the mysteriousness of it, yet I feel I exactly know what is meant.



Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I may of made the mistake of having read Proverb #2 first. Now that I read this piece i have a better understanding of the point that you are attempting to convey. Again, your use of few word exemplfies the idea that less is often more.
-jr

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

So many ideas in two lines, very skillful. I am working on interpreting it. As best as any can another's work. Did you mean to have the bullet like square there? I'm sure you did, and I enjoy it very much.

Posted 16 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

what does this mean?

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 2 people found this review constructive.

wow! Strikes to the very core.

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Abstract and at the same time, infused qualities of the likes of metaphysical poetry.

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I absolutely get this one! Crying within letting all of the emotions steep keeping them alive in some way which would provoke a false sense of immortality.. I so love the way every reader is moved in one direction or another! That is the fantastic wonder of writing!!! Take care~~~

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

An accurate analysis in my opinion Legacy. Mmmmmm contemplative Tai

Posted 17 Years Ago


1 of 2 people found this review constructive.


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