Absinthe

I wrote this while drinking absinthe...

Breathing extraneously
Empty lungs exhaling
Heart pumping nihility
Twisted up
You twist me out
Pull me up
Pull me down
Don't say what you're thinking
I know you won't
This tires me
Our empty heads
Hands like lead
Bring quickened breath
Tighten up
Tighter still
To lovely death
You don't have the courage
But soon we'll have no choice
So quicken your words
Louden your voice
I'll let you my silence
If you let me your noise

Reviews

[LefthandWrite]

It is a pretty yellow, green mellow... ;-)
I loved this write... it is the drink that poisons, and
is used within many story lines. It is magick with "ck"
Such a clever write, full of insights...
Enjoyed the quirky factor of it.... ;)

- Elisa

[LefthandWrite]

Well thank you!

You're welcome :)