When I write

Derp....wanted to write a poem. Here it is.

Thoughts speed from my head to my fingers

Words pop out on the page

Emotions linger

As rhymes form 

 Pages torn 

Because thoughts do not come across

I fearfully at a loss

Turn to others for advice

Try to make it sound nice 

and put it away 

To wait for another day...

Author's Note

Blah...can you tell how bored I am?...Sorry if it's not great, I wrote this on a whim.

Reviews

[LostandAlone]

I like this. It's very nice.

[Ashley G.]

Thanks!

[marie]

i fearfully at a loss would sound better as i'm fearfully at a loss
other than that you did a great job:) nice rhyme scheme good rhythm

[Ethale Captor]

Nice job, when did you write it?

[Ashley G.]

=...

[Ethale Captor]

...?

[Ashley G.]

(It didn't type how I wanted it)
* = ....

[Ashley G.]

it did it again RAWWWR! :(....

[marie]

what are you trying to do? :?

[Ethale Captor]

That is what I am trying to figure out...

[Ashley G.]

I was trying to type a face, the equal sign with a slash. It won't work see look...
=/ =

[Ashley G.]

Okay one worked...

[Ethale Captor]

Oh, alright.

[Ashley G.]

For something that should have been a short comment that dragged on a while....

[Ethale Captor]

Quite.

[marie]

all that over a face...

[Ethale Captor]

Interesting.

[marie]

verily

[Ethale Captor]

I don't believe I've heard you use that one for quite some time.

[marie]

meh, i'm bringing it back:) lol

[Ethale Captor]

Might as well, if you do not use it anytime soon, Farigod will.

[Ashley G.]

Farigod...that sounds familiar....

[Ethale Captor]

Subject 21, something Marie and I will never forget even if we wanted to. The entire book will forever be plagued into our minds, never to leave us alone again.

[marie]

It's sooo horrifying!!

[Ethale Captor]

Agreed.

[Ashley G.]

Marie can quote the first chapter right? (If you can; don't)

[marie]

the cave was cold dark and damp, but this did not bother may. her arm and wing were broken, but this did not bother her either. however what terrified her beyond thought was that she had not had any real blood in the past week.

just cause you asked me not to, theres the first paragraph, from memory:b

[Ethale Captor]

I am able to quote most of the Prologue, and numerous random paragraphs of the original text, but I am only able to paraphrase the majority of the book. Nonetheless, I know its entirety.

[marie]

uhm.... hmmm lets test that>:) what is the first question asked to rahveine when she is put into the facility and may is still unconscious>:)

[Ethale Captor]

Are you referring to the questions asked of her on the monitor? If so, it was what color an apple was, whereas she replied by asking red delicious or granny smith. The monitor replied "Red delicious apple", and Rahveine chose the answer. When she said "Thank you", it replied "You're Welcome", and she spazzed and asked, "What color is that!?".

Was that it?

[marie]

oh yes:), noooww>:) what portion of nabrana's body did may stab to create a distraction when she kidnapped her?

[Ethale Captor]

When May kidnapped her from the hotel? She plunged a dagger/knife into her thigh, dragging her down the hall and out the window. For what is may be worth, May also complained about getting blood on her new outfit, where she resolved to carry Nabrana by her neck.

[marie]

what color are nabranas eyes?

[Ethale Captor]

Black. Really? What kind of question is that? They are blue.

[Ethale Captor]

My turn. Rahveine says something while carrying May by her neck at the end of the book. Fill in the blanks, "Leaving ______ _________ ______ like the _____."

What did she say?