Lovely

Valentine's Day Poem!

Lovely roses 

here and there;

Lovely flowers everywhere

Perfume is in the air.

Lovers poems,

chocolate hearts,

Hearts in your eyes 

because of Cupid's dart.

Lovely thorns on lovely roses,

Lovely heartaches 

and poisoned chocolates.

Lovely lies and alibis.

That make you cry 

as the day for love 

is lonesome and after one day 

dies.

Author's Note

Valentine's is just around the corner! Sorry it's a bit depressing I might write a happier one later.

Reviews

[Ethale Captor]

This is the best Valentines poem I have read.

[Dalia]

Honestly Ashley am glad you've ended it up that way, not that I want it sad, but that's the way it really seems like, but hopefully you'll write a happier one soon dear :)

[LostandAlone]

I really like this poem... Is beautifully written...

[marie]

please write a happy one!!! *starts bawling* this isn't the happy ever after joey and i want!!

[Ashley G.]

So you want me to write you and joey's happy ever after? *smirk*

[marie]

uh...no thats Gods job, but something happy so i dont get all paranoid over other peoples stories!!

[Ashley G.]

Kay!

[Ashley G.]

Darn it! That was one word! Argh...

[marie]

:)

[marie]

lol:) ashley!! more single wordedness?

[Ashley G.]

wordeded? worded? Blahbleh can't say it....

[marie]

word--ehd-ness

[Ashley G.]

*not even going to try* anyway I'm gonna try and think of something to write now.

[marie]

think!! keep thinking!! THINK!!!! ASHLEY I SAID THINK!! STOP SMILING AND THINK!! I TOLDESS CHU TO THINK LISTEN TO ME YOUNG LADY!!!

[Ashley G.]

Can't think; laughing! HAHAHA!

[marie]

*starts rasping* THINK!!! THINK THOUGHTS!! YOUR NOT THINKING THOUGHTS YOUR THINKING LAUGHTER....gah!!! do you not know how to think girly? here its like saying words in your head ok now try it!! THINK!!!

[Ashley G.]

*Thinking* Let's see now...duh...

[marie]

*brightens up like a light bulb and bubbles out* what is it?

[Ashley G.]

I drew a blank...

[marie]

NOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!! *glares at you, grabs your shoulders and shakes you* THINK ASHELY THINK!!! NOW THINK..........now think now think now think now think i commands chu!!!