~Release The Chains~

~Release The Chains~

A Poem by Leelanne

Blending into the crowd, most cannot see...

The power behind your eyes, the strength of your soul,

Allow me to look through, catch the lust filling me...

Rushing through my body, knowing the story you tell...

Hide it as you wish, keep your existance rare,

My promise to not share your secret, I hold well...

Let me into your underworld, darkness I fear not...

Take my hand... lead the way,

Craving to share this moment, I have sought...

Run your hands through my hair, grip it tight...

See the passion in my eyes, only for you,

Tilt my head back, relax...I shall not fight...

Hunger taking over, I feel you need me so...

Watching your fangs elongate, I offer myself,

Pain is not my worry, taste me...do what you know...

Fill yourself with life, passion and fire...

Yours for the taking, I'll be here for you,

Forever your female, hold onto my desire...

© 2011 Leelanne


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Thank you everyone for your wonderful reviews. It means so much to know that my writing is enjoyed by other talented writers.

Posted 12 Years Ago


The intensity of the wording shceme lends to the out right perfect emotion of the piece, well done, good read.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Your words create the intensity of new love excellently. I love your phrasing too! Bravo!

Posted 12 Years Ago


A sultry write that expresses longing and desire. Excellent poem.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

HOT

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Leelanne
Leelanne

Brooklyn, NY



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Writing is my passion...it's the air that I breath, the beat of my heart, and the blood in my veins. I love to be creative and open to all styles of expression through words. more..

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A Poem by Leelanne