SUGARTOWN
A Poem by
LeeLee Ryder
luscious creamy xmas treats
SUGARTOWN MOUTH WATERING CHOCOLATE FLAVORED LOVE SLIDES DOWN SLOPES OF PENETRATING STARS ABOVE TINKLING JUICY PINWHEELS & CHERRY PAINTED PIES SPIN TIL THE DAY HITS THE SUNSET FLAVORED SKIES TART POMEGRANATES & SUGARY POWDERED CAKE FLY UP TO THE CEILING TIL THE HEART BEGINS TO ACHE LAUGHING PEACHY SYRUP & FRUITY LEMON DROP RUNS INTO THE OCEAN & MAKES THE EYES GO POP SMILING KUMQUAT SOUFFLES & CHILI PEPPERED CREMES HEAT UP THE MIND N BODY & ELECTRIFY OUR DREAMS
©2009 LLR 122409 610P
© 2009 LeeLee Ryder
Reviews
I want all of these since you mentioned it.
Otherwise I am hard on myself; passing by treats
in the super market except for organic jellies.
xoxo,
Jack
Posted 14 Years Ago
Gorged, full, obese, I hate that feeling too. This poem shows excess as it is. Craving ghastlyness! Like the work a lot!
Posted 14 Years Ago
Gorged, full, obese, I hate that feeling too. This poem shows excess as it is. Craving ghastlyness! Like the work a lot!
yay for ear candy!!!!
Posted 14 Years Ago
yay for ear candy!!!!
I cannot say I ever tasted a kumquat souffle or a chili pepper creme, but they both sound interesting! Thanks for the fun look into your crazy fridge!
Happy Holidays, LeeLee.
Posted 14 Years Ago
I cannot say I ever tasted a kumquat souffle or a chili pepper creme, but they both sound interesting! Thanks for the fun look into your crazy fridge!
Happy Holidays, LeeLee.
You have a wonderful way of making food and treats so SEXY!!
I love this, but not have to go brush. Too much sugar, bad for the pearly whites!!
Wonderful, witty, lyrical..
Posted 14 Years Ago
You have a wonderful way of making food and treats so SEXY!!
I love this, but not have to go brush. Too much sugar, bad for the pearly whites!!
Wonderful, witty, lyrical..
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
Very cute. The poem's so sweet, I think I felt a cavity while reading this... or was that just from smiling and drooling? All that aside, this was great.
Posted 14 Years Ago
Very cute. The poem's so sweet, I think I felt a cavity while reading this... or was that just from smiling and drooling? All that aside, this was great.
Such good sweet foods to be ate. A excellent poem. It made me desire a lot of candy and good things.
Coyote.
Posted 14 Years Ago
Such good sweet foods to be ate. A excellent poem. It made me desire a lot of candy and good things.
Coyote.
I thought this was cute
And enjoyable read!
Posted 14 Years Ago
I thought this was cute
And enjoyable read!
ok kind of sexy but it did make me smile.
Thanks for sharing LeeLee.
Merry Christmas
Kelley Enzo
Posted 14 Years Ago
ok kind of sexy but it did make me smile.
Thanks for sharing LeeLee.
Merry Christmas
Kelley Enzo
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LeeLee Ryder Mtn Extraordinaire, CA
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