Cascading Pour

Drip-
Drip-
Feel it slip.
Pain-
Pain-
Pouring like rain.
Cry-
Cry-
Maybe i just want to die.
Eyes-
Eyes-
Making me cry.
Hurt-
Hurt-
I've lost my self worth.

Reviews

[Silver]

your words fall like rain drops all over me

[Coyote Poetry]

Strong use of words made the emotion come alive to the reader. When tears fall like rain, old heart slowly died. Thank you LeeAnne for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote