Untitiled

When you heal yourself and allow yourself to feel unfiltered. I've learned that allowing love to be my weapon of choice is a lot harder to achieve than allowing negativity take the lead.

“I’m just now realizing that there is evil in this world,

I was too busy being human,

Learning to live through my own suffering,

I woke up to a new place,

And now that I’m there I feel too much,

I feel helpless without the proper arsenal,

Amidst the deepest feelings that flow through me,

I somehow manage to find strength,

If only I’d allow myself to experience abundantly,

At some point I’m bound to overflow,

Right?

Opening gateways to a higher consciousness,

Doing not saying to achieve truth,

Nothing more beautiful can be accomplished,

When you see the light, there’s no turning back.

I hesitate to give permission,

When energies are off balance,

A judging eye is sure to appear,

One can hope the analysis is accurate,

To protect the peace,

The energy,

That the process gives.

The giving is a gift,

Let gratitude ring.”

Author's Note

Does this flow? I feel iffy about the ending but at the same time I feel inclined to Let it live the way it was created.

Reviews

[KCthelastboyscout]

Just write it and let it go.its done.that energy is gone.
This is an interesting introspective.
Whatever you see inside of yourself that's who you really are.i see the light in you

[Lechusa]

Thank you for saying that. Recognizing the light in someone, to me, is one of the best compliments one could ever receive.

It is a deep introspective piece for me. A rare moment of clarity.

Thank you reading and reviewing, means alot!

[KCthelastboyscout]

I'm just getting started with your work.You have peaked my interest just reading some of your stories

[Lechusa]

Thank you!

I'm new to writing, so I appreciate the feedback. I just came back to WC. Will stop by your page as well. :)