World Of Chaos

World Of Chaos

A Poem by Ashley D'Costa
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simply quoting the chaotic world

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From the inception of the world born chaos
Mighty and powerful it lived like an immortal
Engulfing the minds of civilians in this world
Erupting like a volcano with tremendous music
It quoted,"Guns should be the tongues"
Deaths of millions no longer pleased it
Demanding more blood it lived like a vampire
In this world of cruelty and brutality.

© 2013 Ashley D'Costa


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I don't believe the plan was war. I believe greed of man took man to soldiers and profit. Was a perfect world once. Greed and fear stole hope and love. Most religion project love and forgiveness. In Christian and Muslim belief. It is set the example and lead to the proper god. Man had twisted the words to the advantage of evil people. The meek must stand together or the meek will fall together without a scream. A powerful poem. You made me think. Goal of the writer. Thank you for the excellent poem.
Coyote

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ashley D'Costa

11 Years Ago

Thank you for the review



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I do not think war birthed chaos. People did, guns were merely an instrument.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I don't believe the plan was war. I believe greed of man took man to soldiers and profit. Was a perfect world once. Greed and fear stole hope and love. Most religion project love and forgiveness. In Christian and Muslim belief. It is set the example and lead to the proper god. Man had twisted the words to the advantage of evil people. The meek must stand together or the meek will fall together without a scream. A powerful poem. You made me think. Goal of the writer. Thank you for the excellent poem.
Coyote

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ashley D'Costa

11 Years Ago

Thank you for the review

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Ashley D'Costa
Ashley D'Costa

Kollam, Kerala, India



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I am an independent film maker.I am also a writer and my writing keeps me moving forward.I have written so many stories but I am too lazy to type in my writings into a computer.Paper and Pen,those are.. more..

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