Betrayal

...response...

One Day

    One Step

         One Breath

              One Word

                     At
                               
                          A
                                        
                              Time.

Author's Note

i let the water flow over me and past me to cleanse my spirit

Reviews

[DELETED]

I love the way you wrote this!

[Shutterbug]

i really like it. Sometimes that is all we can do.

[Ed Hart]

there's "twelve steps," and then there's this...

[Subjective Sanity]

I like how the words translate visually. I am big on playing with word/line placement.

[xXx]

this is so classic i can see as your style .. rich .. wonderful .. clever pied piper .. lol .. this one i will remember for saving myself

[Gandré]

So minimalism is what you love. Why didn't he hold your hand when you had stray aside... I like this thought ..with feeling over-wrought.

[Emily B]

seems to me you're off to a very good start . . . scoot over, may be there are some things I should let roll off my back too