Hopscotch Lover

Hopscotch Lover

A Poem by Leaner Pastures
"

turbulent waters

"

I jump to conclusions

to follow your lead

yet you keep refusing

how much I bleed

 

Only a flesh wound

nothing to fear

If only I wasn't tuned

to you , My Dear

© 2009 Leaner Pastures


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very clever...i am liking the title. You did a good job with word economy here. so much stated with so few words

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

oh . . .

I can already tell you're going to be one of those people whose words just draw me in over and over.

Glad to find you finally. :)

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on December 14, 2009
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No more land of Fat and Honey for me... I'm off in search of Leaner Pastures ________________________________________ Most of my work is straight to the page and unedited, striving for the puri.. more..

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