Passage

Passage

A Poem by Leaner Pastures
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Haiku

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I walk

you pass me

sitting

© 2009 Leaner Pastures


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I love concentrated poetry that had maximum impact and this one is wonderful. Not a 5-7-5 haiku however, but an extremely good short poem.

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

My biggest regret is walking past a stranger a few years ago in the Las Vegas airport. I've never seen such need in any one person's eyes and I let my notions of propriety lead me away . . .

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

How many friendships have we missed by walking by a kind smile or lonely person. In a few words you said a lot.
Coyote

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on December 12, 2009
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No more land of Fat and Honey for me... I'm off in search of Leaner Pastures ________________________________________ Most of my work is straight to the page and unedited, striving for the puri.. more..

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