Locked world

Locked world

A Poem by Leandro Mendez

The door is locked,
the key is lost.
The world on
the other side
awaits to be known.

© 2013 Leandro Mendez


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Now you are making me curious to know the world behind this locked door.
I feel like i am in an adventurous game world where to go to next level you have to unlock this door. But how??
Now i am searching desperately
Where's is the key?
Ha ha
Nice man :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


A great poem for a introvert. LOL Great job.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Leandro Mendez

11 Years Ago

thanks! haha
laconic and makes sense. i love it.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Leandro Mendez

11 Years Ago

yeah simple, thanks for reading.
Nice...but wish there is more to read!



Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Leandro Mendez

11 Years Ago

thanks for reading!

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Added on September 4, 2013
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Leandro Mendez
Leandro Mendez

Santa Fe, Santa Fe, Argentina



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I am just a random guy that landed here. I've been writing for some time. Now, I am just trying to better my writing: lyrics, free verse. Thanks for reading. more..

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