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Playing in a
reality that comforts me
not,
I grew tired
of.

I've had a vision
of these
narrowed minded
walls
being melted
and finally lost.

Freedom for us all,
breaking through
the blindfold
that limited
the infiniteness
of our being.

A light of hope.
 

Reviews

[Frieda P]

Unique and uplifting read Leandro....great job.

[Leandro Mendez]

thanks a lot Frieda!

[s y e]

This is such an amazing write, Lee - I loved it all, the wording was fantastic, really made an impact. Awesome job.

[Leandro Mendez]

thank you!!

[B-poet]

This is a inspirational & a trendy cutting edge type of poem. Loved the chosen diction you've displayed here. Great write. A compelling read. :)

[Leandro Mendez]

thanks a lot!!