My half of our story

I was walking,
thinking, singing
(at some point),
and all of the sudden
something shone.

It was you,
your glance, my love,
believe me or not.
I didn't want to
tell you,
I was
nervous, nervous,
oh so nervous
I couldn't talk,
I stopped my walk.

I got lost in your eyes,
felt something
I forgot.

And now
I feel a warmth,
don't know why.

Guess it's your smile.

Now, what should
 I do?
I just don't want
to disappear
at the end of the street.

Since I couldn't speak,
I wrote a poem
with very little hope.

I gave it to you
with a smile
and a bye.

I just hope it made
you smile,
a random guy
giving you something like that,
out of the blue,
and my phone number
in the back.

Reviews

[Half Dream]

Haha! Such a cute poem.. It really made me smile. I really enjoyed reading this Leandro. :)

[Leandro Mendez]

:) glad you enjoyed!

[Pryde Foltz]

Lovely and I definitely smiled.

[Leandro Mendez]

thank you :)

[annabellee]

such a sweet and cute poem, it actually did make me smile... Enjoyed it a lot :)

[Leandro Mendez]

aw thanks hehe

[annabellee]

you're most welcome :)

[Melanie Genevieve]

hehehe that's really cute. ah I'd love a guy to give me a poem with his digits on the back

[Leandro Mendez]

:) thank you! hehe few people would do that! but you never know!

[s y e]

Another great job, Lee - ha, did you actually do this? Give her your phone number on the back? Or is this just made up? Or am I reading it wrong? if so, whoops. I loved it though!

[Leandro Mendez]

may be, good question, but they never call, I assume. thank you!

[s y e]

Give it time, depending on when you gave her your number.....

[Leandro Mendez]

hahahahah it was a long time ago, i wrote this a while back :)