The beginning of the aftermath

I want to be
the drop of water
that falls in
the middle of
the ocean
that causes ripples
that become waves
miles apart
from where
I first fell.

Reviews

[Melanie Genevieve]

I really love the idea behind this. I think this is my favorite of yours so far. Short but cool structure. The title is perfect. I think we all have that desire to have an impact on the world around us and one great way to do that is by writing. Keep it up!

[Leandro Mendez]

well glad you have a favorite one lol thank you!

[Betty]

Short and sweet, which made this poem all the more effective!! And what i loved most was the imagery "that become waves miles apart from where I first fell. " thought provoking indeed!!!
Great write Leandro.

[Leandro Mendez]

thanks so much :)

[Leigh]

Everything is interconnected and I get a feeling of the butterfly effect from this one - This is concise, but full of content and very imaginative thats difficult

[Leandro Mendez]

thanks so much!

[annabellee]

I can totally relate to that. I loved the imagery you used here. Well done :)

[Leandro Mendez]

thank you!!

[annabellee]

you're most welcome :)

[Pryde Foltz]

Yeah, I like the simple and concise nature of this write. But the message complex and deep. Splendid.

[Leandro Mendez]

glad you enjoyed!

[s y e]

This is great, Lee - I loved the structure and the wording. Your title gripped me and I had to read it, haha. Awesome job.

Muy bien!

~ Noodle ~

[Leandro Mendez]

Thank you Noodle :)