I'm yours, be mine?

You're back
in my arms.
It's not a dream,
thank God.

I've seen my world
without you around,
it's very cold
and dark.

I'm astonished in your
comeback.
I'm speechless when
you're close by.

You're here again,
a wish that came
to life.

Stay with me.
Even though I'm not
the best man alive,
all I want is to make you laugh.

Reviews

[DCT ponderings]

He is Speechless at her return, regret is an interesting motivator. What is it they say- you don't know what you had till its gone. At the end of the poem I found myself wondering, can he hold on to that feeling now that he has her back? Will he deserve her return? Made me wonder indeed! Great write.

[Leandro Mendez]

I love your reviews (for the record, hahah) there would be only one way to find out if he deserves her...

[DCT ponderings]

Time will tell the tale. :)

[NA]

Oh what a wonderful feeling that would be, to have the one you love back in your arms...you penned it well...enjoyed :) x

[Leandro Mendez]

thanks a lot Raven :) always glad you enjoy
:)

[s y e]

This is a lovely write, Lee. I loved it, its sweet and quite cute. :) Nicely done.

Muy Bien!

~ Noodle.

[Leandro Mendez]

thanks Noodle :)

[B-poet]

This reminds me when someone gets butterflies in their stomach when Ms. Lovely shows up on the scene. Or when cupid decides to drop by around valentine's day so you can share your infatuation with Ms. Lovely. Nice work. An enjoyable read. :)

[Leandro Mendez]

if she'd come back everything would be in like slow motion hahah thanks a lot Bpoet