I can't help it

Break my heart.
Do me the favor.
It's the only way
my heart will understand
that it has to let you go.

Too many errors
I've committed,
I have no problem
admitting them.
I'd love for you to know
every color I've been...

... and for you to
let me get to know you the same way.

I, perfectly, understand
that it's too late
and that my chance
flew away like ashes.

But my heart doesn't
understand.

And it always
says the same thing to me:

"The sky is azure,
the water is wet,
and I love her".


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Rompeme el corazon.
Haceme el favor.
Es de la unica manera
que mi corazon entendera
que te tiene que soltar.

Demasiados errores cometi,
no tengo problema en
podertelo admitir.
Me encantaria que conozcas
todos los colores que fui...

... y que vos me dejes
conocerte, asi, tambien.

Entiendo, perfectamente, que
es tarde y que mi chance
volo como cenizas de papel.

Pero mi corazon
no entiende.

Y siempre me repite
el mismo dicho:

"El cielo es azul,
el agua moja,
y yo la amo a ella".

Author's Note

This is a piece originally written in Spanish, that is why I posted it in the bottom, for any Spanish readers out there. It's the first time I share a Spanish piece, I haven't finished the journal yet.. but I wanted to see if anybody likes my kind of "new" stuff. Hope you enjoyed. Thanks for reading.

Reviews

[Carlton Rolle]

I understand quite well. the feeling of.losing something so close. Is this piece from your own experience, did it help get over the feeling?

[Leandro Mendez]

Yes and no hahaha.. thank you for reading man.

[s y e]

Ahhh, Spanish! xD I loved it, I tried to read the Spanish and pretended I could say all the words, hahaha. This was beautiful, Lee ~ I loved it. I'd love you to finish the journal, it was great!

~ Noodle.

[Leandro Mendez]

hahahahah yeah i tried to translate the best possible :) thank you!! its been taking me a while..

[s y e]

It's awesome! I love it, this is me getting extra Spanish lessons, ha!

[NA]

Heartfelt...beautifully written..thank you also for the Spanish lesson :)

[Leandro Mendez]

Sorry.. I wanted to experience doing the translation hehe

[NA]

Oh don't be sorry...I enjoyed :)

[B-poet]

Very well done and truly heartfelt. There's nothing like the feeling of regret when it comes to a lost love. You don't know what you got till it's gone for sure. Both versions are fine writes and reads. Great job. :)

[Leandro Mendez]

thank you!