Look into my eyes

I just want to
lay with you
in a green, open
field, with an ageless
tree to climb and hide
under the shade.

I want to share with you
the blueness of the sky
with grayish clouds
going south.

Share a moment
of comfortable silence,
with kisses and smiles.

I want to forget the constant
city noise,
the awkward talk with
people lost in the
paparazzi world.

I want to run away
from music with
no soul,
music that makes money
while we are being
ripped off.

You're the key
to a new world.

I'm not crazy,
those are my thoughts.

You turned,
blushed.

You agree with me,
I know.

Reviews

[annabellee]

oh that's a really sweet poem, I loved it, it flows very well.
Enjoyed it a lot :)

[Leandro Mendez]

thank you!! glad you enjoyed :)

[annabellee]

you're most welcome :)

[Zahra]

Very nice easy and fluent.

[Leandro Mendez]

thank you!

[Frieda P]

It's like an upbeat modern rendition of romance poetry, I'm not sure I'm crazy about the 'ripped off' part, now you're complaining whilst you're supposed to be seducing me with your eyes....just saying ;-)

[Leandro Mendez]

thank you Frieda :) but the point of the complaints was the point of "you are the key to my new world".. but yeah i thought i could add more spice after i posted it.. thank you again :)

[s y e]

Oh wow, well this is beautiful! You're hypnotizing all the lovely women on WC, hahaha xD Nicely done.

~ Noodle.

[Leandro Mendez]

thank you Noodle! hypnotizing wasnt the plan.. or was it? hahah

[s y e]

Hahaha, I think it was!

[DCT ponderings]

Trying to hypnotize with this one....Look into my eyes indeed. Be they end I'm sure any woman would run away with you. Great write.

[Leandro Mendez]

wow thank you very much for your kindness :) i should've posted a picture of my eyes just to make sure haha

[DCT ponderings]

Not necessary this time your words did the trick.

[NA]

Oh so very beautiful..enjoyed :)

[Leandro Mendez]

thank you Raven! always glad you enjoy!