What do you say?

If the heart is
a muscle,
then what's this feeling
'tween my lungs?

I can't grasp
its meaning with words.
Especially,
when you're close.

Your playful smile
makes me drift
to another realm,
only yours and mine.

Sometimes, I hate
that I can only see you
at night,
I apologize.

Time went by
and I did not
realize that this
was happening to us.

We were locking
our memories,
together,
under the moonlight.

I surrendered to
your light,
surrender to mine?

My guard is always down
with you around.
You can tell by
my silly acts.

Dare you
to put your ear
on my chest,
do you hear my heart
beating hard?
Its rhythm is spelling
your name,
I know you heard it.
You looked away
(smiling).

Author's Note

Help me with the title? Please? The first title is 'What do you say?", or should I stick with this one? "Feel free to tell me anything"? Reviews would be very appreciated. Regardless, thank you for reading!!

Reviews

[DCT ponderings]

After reading a few pieces of yours I think woman are coy with you. Often looking away either smiling or blushing. The last stanza of this pieces was terrific.
Dare you
to put your ear
on my chest,
do you hear my heart
beating hard?
Its rhythm is spelling
your name,
I know you heard it.
You looked away
(smiling).

Of course for me you'd now I heard because I'd whisper your name in return. Definitely not look away. Too good.

[Leandro Mendez]

youre too kind to me hahaha thank you and i like to see women smiling and blushing.. the glow that emits from them is priceless..

[s y e]

"Dare you
to put your ear
on my chest,
do you hear my heart
beating hard?
Its rhythm is spelling
your name,
I know you heard it.
You looked away
(smiling)."

I loved this stanza, thought you done an amazing job! It's striking!

~ Noodle.

[annabellee]

This is such a gorgeous poem, I loved it, escpecially the last stanza
"its rythm is spelling your name" that's my favourite line.
Well penned :)
I also like the first title more.

[Leandro Mendez]

thank you so much annabellee!! it seems the last stanza and the first titles are the winner for this one haha

[annabellee]

you're welcome :) yeah, so it seems :)

[Frieda P]

Love that last stanza, so casual yet striking....enjoyed this one Leandro....More like 'what do you feel', than what do you say...good one.

[Half Dream]

Wow! Very sweet and beautiful. As for the titles I'd go with the first one! :)

[Leandro Mendez]

thank you!! yeah the first tittle won :)

[NA]

So very beautiful...

Titles hmmm...I kinda think the first one fits better :)

[Leandro Mendez]

thank you!!! yeah i changed it here because i wanted it to be like the last line but the first one that the reader actually reads hehe