Between us

Desired twine
by two hearts
desperate to collide
with the right ones.

They have each other
in their mind,
separated by a distant
bond.

Chapter unseen
in this life,
might the angel of Love
be confused with
the angel of Lust?

What's coming next
is not foretold,
the union of these two
is wrong.

But it feels right
to them both.

Reviews

[Poetic Beauty]

The union of these two is wrong but feels right to each other. Stunning lines but my thoughts are who is someone on the outside to judge love. It makes me want to know the story behind these star crossed lovers. Curiosity is heighten. Well done!

[Leandro Mendez]

thank you :) I read and read this and I think I could've done better.. (I'll keep it as a draft) thank you for reading :)