Hope

Hannah an inhabitant of the earth, rejected since birth.

Gods amazing creation lays waste in the midst.

For she has been bruised, abused and in spite of these predicaments,

 She never uses it as an excuse.

Objection was the key, and that was the decree.

She ascended and abolished the agony, once inflicted by mankind.

Now she is refined.

Pensive as she was, when succumbed.

She stood strong and now she belongs,

During that time she could only ponder about what was to come.

Detention became a mere illusion

And hope was the conclusion.

It rejoiced her and molded her.

At long last the past was left in the past.

Earth had welcomed her once again,

This time without chains and free from stains.

She whispers in the dawn of the day

''I’ll keep dreaming but this time I’m leading.''

Reviews

[Robbie~xoxo~]

WOW!... The last line was empowering!

This is fantastic!... Hopeful words enriched in light...

I enjoyed reading this optimistic work of art...

Lovely write!~xoxo~:)

[C. Rose]

The creation belongs to God, so "Gods" should be "God's"
I like the rhyming within lines, gives you more freedom that typical rhyming patterns but still lets you have fun.
Interesting how this is a variant of an acrostic. Is there a name for this?

[MsJewel]

Your creativity shines in this well written poem. Beautiful writing my friend.

:) Julie

[Sami Khalil]

"Earth had welcomed her once again,


This time without chains and free from stains."

A splendid read and write. Thank you for sharing...:)...........

[Mya Madden]

This is absolutely amazing!

[Girl With A Pen]

The words Earth, Pensive, Objection, are the strongest stanzas! I adore your writing style. You're poetry has a way of hitting home. :) Keep it up

[Papatunde]

Thank you very much angela.. im glad you liked it

[Wall Hermitt]

Very emotional piece of writing. Great write.

[The Dwarf]

People don't know this but dwarfs have a talent for unearthing great poems from a pile of - well - great poems. Scratch that. This is awkward. Well it just doesn't make sense. Am I doing this for points? S**t! Sorry. Back to the poem? I thought so. Well... this is a heartfelt and stunningly laid out poem that speaks directly to the heart. The story begs for our empathy and as it is thoroughly deserved we are powerless in expressing it. Great piece.