Your eyes and mine

A passion shared without words.

Your eyes and mine

say more than a 

book

filled with the words of a thousand lovers

Electric

Too much for two bodies to handle

Hold me and pin me down

or I will never let go

I need you

because you got me

and I got you

Forbidden taste

sour and sweet

It lingers

on the edge of

my

lips

my

mind

Calling for you

restlessly

Reviews

[SleeplessVolcano]

You expressed the excruciating pain love can sometimes be beautifully.....those calls....like Morse code....into the night......wishing for reciprocation......a lingering longing.....not knowing what will be, except to love as much as possible in this fleeting moment.......

[andrew mitchell]

an exceptionally beautiful write. wow. thank you for sharing

[Relic]

Seduction indeed. The vibration from one soul to another is a powerful feeling between two people. He/she's very lucky to have someone who thinks this deep. Nice writing.

[LeahRhodes]

Thank you very much for your review, Relic. It is one of my first pieces and I am glad to know the electricity I tried to convey was perceived in this poem.