Silent Awakening

A Poem by Vertigo

Varied light in shallow breaks

Within cracked stained windows

Dreamless figures

And solemn sunsets

Faltering in every step

Tattered as a castle

Breathing stale air

Fallen love

Silent dreams

Pressing within every soundless awakening

© 2010 Vertigo

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changeofseason

This is beautiful and very well written...I felt as if I could see the exact images you described in the poem. Haunting.

Posted 14 Years Ago

Michael X

dawns ealy light piercing the iris, beautiful artwork, the imagery has an ambience which gives the picture a ceertain waking feeling liken to a dream.
I really enjoyed reading.

Posted 14 Years Ago

deeps

I felt this as a sad write. Strong emotion. It is very well written and expressed!

Posted 14 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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Added on January 1, 2010
Last Updated on January 1, 2010

Author

Vertigo

Lithia Springs, GA

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My work...does have personal meaning, however in poetry it's about how it makes you feel or how it speaks to you... -----------------------------------------------------------------------------------.. more..