A soundless being

The icy heat 

Of a soundless being

Searing the edges of reason

That we are countless

Yet individual

And I am within

Every shallow beat

That rises

Even as I reach 

Into your silent eyes

Wise as an owls wing

Reviews

[Markymark]

Beautiful...up until the last line. Maybe it's just me, but It reads oddly. Not sure why. I read, then re-read thinking I missed a verb. Wiser than? Hmmmm. I'm stumped as to why. Can you elaborate? I want to "see" the summation.

Thanks,

Mark