In the silence

 All i can be

In the silence

We want in need

And need in want

Trial and error

Rising tears

Blatant are we

In the silence

Crying for the call

Hearing the echos

And I want to fly with crows wings

Black as midnight

In dreaming 

Facing timeless moons

With everything that ever was

Or will be

Tied to my feathers

In the silence

Reviews

[deeps]

This is a wonderful write here quite the interesting one. But it's an enjoyable read.

[Abd-afeez]

This is excellent. Its like you show your emotions poetically. I like the way you followed up the lines. even though their is no much rhyme, the flow is however obvious. Good job.

[Simone]

Interesting write. I love your style in this poem and the emotion is evident. Great job and keep up the good work ^_^