Hour Glass

 It's like trying to hold sand

Between your fingers

As if time were just a number 

You followed on your watch

Like following a star

Though its light is baron

And lost

To the universal tides

Even when you meet the ocean

Pulling you in

You are still

Upon the waves 

To be one in all

To rise and fall

It's like trying to hold sand

Between your fingers

As if time were just a number

You followed on your watch

Reviews

[Dillon Cotter]

I like this one, very good flow of words. Overall a wonderful job.

-Will