Better Weather

Better Weather

A Poem by Vertigo

 Shadowed irises

Filled with butterflies
And the light filters through and through
Like a dreamscape.
I fall through the air
As a feather
That has known better weather
Like the calm after a storm
And I am faded on the edges
With these eyes filled with butterflies.

© 2009 Vertigo


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I really loved this! It was so dreamlike and very surreal. This was a beautiful write which I found to be very artistic and poetic. I liked the natural flow and progression of this piece, and the imagery that you created.
~PaperHearts =]

Posted 15 Years Ago


This is so wonderful and so beuatiful!

Posted 15 Years Ago


Short and very sweet..God bless..Valentine

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on November 14, 2009

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Vertigo
Vertigo

Lithia Springs, GA



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