Lightning

 Following the lightning strikes

Fighting the night skies

Clouded membranes

Unsustained

And my heart beats

Incessantly against the barriers

Letting the wind pull at my hair

The storm spinning everywhere

And I am always watching

And waiting, anticipating

Flowing with the undulating currents

As every strike pulls me in...

Reviews

[brookedasright]

This is really powerful.I like it. It's got this feeling to it,that makes me imagine myself in a storm. Great Job!

[deeps]

Such a powerful write here,
I like this alot, it was intense I agree!

[BelowABridge]

gorgeous and intense. the pace really quickens at the end and pulled me in. i love watching lightning and rain and stormy weather, reading this really described that almost adrenaline like in a wierd way feeling.