It's A Long Way Down

 It's a long way down

With the thrum of the guitar

In the back of my mind

Pulling strings

Like a lucid dream

To awaken me

But what is there left but empty space

In every corner 

I reside in the hidden places

And my eyes are wide open to the sounds 

Surrounding

As though I could find your voice

And be sure.

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It's a long way down
With the thrum
of the guitar
In the back of my mind
Pulling strings
Like a lucid dream

Awesome lines here!
I like this write, very enjoyable read
with an amazing flow!