Tearless Cries

 Even when I'm missing you 

And it's after dark

With every spark against the sky

And the light bends

In everything I am sending

I close my eyes

Wiser than that of the endless

Battles breaking

Mistaking every tearless cry...

Reviews

[Gus McFarland]

I like point this makes. Every line is something you must feel as you write.
I love this line, "And the light bends".

The entire poem is very good.

[deeps]

Such an emotional write here,
I can feel your words pour!