Hazel

Hazel

A Poem by Vertigo

I am isolated
And understated
Like one-in-a-million
Lost in a billion
And there are still lines to cross...
I could fly
If i tried
Reaching endlessly
For a hand
Or just someone to understand
That there is more hidden behind my sighs
Even in these hazel eyes...

© 2009 Vertigo


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very calmn and still, with a little rhythm, my suggestion would be to work on the images the words you choose convey.

Posted 15 Years Ago
Ah! this is such a wonderful write here,
Such a wonderful flow as well. A very talented write.


Posted 15 Years Ago

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 Added on November 6, 2009
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Vertigo
Vertigo

Lithia Springs, GA



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