Turning

Turning

A Poem by Vertigo

To be impartial
And undone
My shallow breaths
Are clouded
With everything between us
Like time couldn't tell
I balance on the edge
With nowhere to turn
And everything you saw in me
Would fade into my faltering pace

© 2009 Vertigo


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I loved the last few lines. They really made me think and ponder. Nice work.

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 Added on November 1, 2009

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Vertigo
Vertigo

Lithia Springs, GA



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