Blur

I am blurred on the edges
Surrounded like an eye of a hurricane
I am sustained
And shattered
All at once
With everything I ever was
Hidden behind my irises
And everything you could ever be...
Hidden in the shadows of this world.

Reviews

[Michael Schiebel]

Interesting piece. I like them imagery.

[Michael X]

this blew me away, the description hidden behind the wall of the shadow, the hurricane.
speaks volumes, your work is phenomonal

[Lilith]

Very good piece! Though I would suggest removing the ellipse from the second-to-last line. It doesn't really fit, especially since it is the only one in the entire piece.

[SilentDreamer]

Cute. No exact flow or rhyming scheme but it's still a good poem. Great job. Great write. Well expressed. :D Keep writing.