The Distance Between

Accented by the light that plays along your skin and every breath that I breathe life into you as if you could ever be more than a dream as if I could fathom the human condition with its beautiful imperfections...I could know you without a doubt, if I ever saw truth in your face, misplaced with the mist between us and the miles and miles that set us apart that can only be lifted if we knew how to face each other for who we are...

Reviews

[Kenny L. Mitchell]

I love the poem itself. The structure and run on sentences sorta distract away from the overall piece however. Love the concept...just execution leaves it a little to be desired! Good work though!