To Be Understood

What would be known that your life and mine should burn into one another like embers of a fire like lightning leaving its mark and we're falling over the edge with the vertigo calling us down just so that we would learn to fly...but it is only me here just as my eyes rise to seek your ringed irises in their belief with a clear mind behind them as though we could actually be understood. I am as clear as an autumn sunset that meets every moment in its perfect light, but I have yet to be realized.

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calling us down just so that we would learn to fly.

yes I really enjoyed these lines
I can feel the strength pull through in this write
Very well stated write you have here.